Announcements:-No Shame begins this Friday-Audition for the Fall Play-Learn to dance, ballroom style1. The Merchant of Testes by Paul Goldie2. Killer Beans Written by Lily "LC" Chong and inspired by Lainey Harrison3. A History of Football by King Sophie4. Spam by the Brothers Achrazoglou(Food rap)5. Fort Knox is in Some Serious Trouble by O'Sandra6. Summer of '07 by Lily Chong7. Worst Birthday Ever by King Sophie8. Of Encyclopedias and Pole Dancers by Emilia Bates9. Untitled Document by LILLYGood one guys
1. The Merchant of Testes by Paul GoldiePretty good. It had some A+ moments.2. Killer Beans Written by Lily "LC" Chong and inspired by Lainey HarrisonOne of Lily's best.3. A History of Football by King SophieI liked the writing and the performance. Good job, Sophsoph (that's your new nickname).4. Spam by the Brothers Achrazoglou(Food rap)I'm bad at rapping, but I think the piece was received well.5. Fort Knox is in Some Serious Trouble by O'SandraProbably the best of the night, but, in my opinion, it would have been better without the last line.6. Summer of '07 by Lily ChongPretty cool song, but I couldn't figure out why that hand gesture meant '07.7. Worst Birthday Ever by King SophieReally good. Osean was perfection.8. Of Encyclopedias and Pole Dancers by Emilia BatesGood.9. Untitled Document by LILLYI don't even remember this one...but it was probably good.
1. The Merchant of Testes by Paul GoldieBoy was I uncomfortable for a little bit. But it trned out to be quite clever.2. Killer Beans Written by Lily "LC" Chong and inspired by Lainey HarrisonOverall, marked improvements by Lily. Good work.3. A History of Football by King SophieMan, I read this during the fire drill on that wednesday and it was some seriously funny stuff. But I felt there was something a little off about the delivery, I'm not sure what. No to say it wasn't good, cause it was, I just felt it could have been even better.4. Spam by the Brothers Achrazoglou(Food rap)Man-alive. Good.5. Fort Knox is in Some Serious Trouble by O'SandraI was just kind of lukewarm on this piece.6. Summer of '07 by Lily ChongIt seems like we've been over the copyright infringement issues with previous pieces like this one.7. Worst Birthday Ever by King SophieI felt that the only thing wrong with this piece was that we were all sqished together and were maybe blocking ourselves away from the audience. I tried to move away a little during it, but it just didn't work because of what was going on in the piece. Also I'm not sure if everyone understood it because it didn't seem like people were laughing enough because it was seriously very funny.8. Of Encyclopedias and Pole Dancers by Emilia BatesEmi's done better.9. Untitled Document by LILLYI remember this piece being funny, but I don't remember why. Also didn't feel like Lilly's best. But Janet told me that she really liked it.I feel like overall it was a pretty good Yes Shame. But it felt a little like everyone was just warming up. Which is a good thing because now everyone is going to write some seriously amazing stuff from here on out.
1. The Merchant of Testes by Paul GoldieI don't have much to say but it was good.2. Killer Beans Written by Lily "LC" Chong and inspired by Lainey HarrisonI didn't understand the end, but I thought it was actually quite good.3. A History of Football by King SophieBest Piece Ever?4. Spam by the Brothers AchrazoglouPretty much everything the Brothers Achrazoglou touch turns to gold.5. Fort Knox is in Some Serious Trouble by O'SandraI liked it. Osean's performance was pretty excellent.6. Summer of '07 by Lily ChongEh7. Worst Birthday Ever by King SophieYeah I thought it was good but the audience didn't seem too into it I guess.8. Of Encyclopedias and Pole Dancers by Emilia BatesI'm sorry I don't remember this one at all for some reason9. Untitled Document by LILLYMeh... I got showed up by the other great stuff in the order. I agree, not my best.Hey what happened to those freshmen I was promised?
Yeah, I can't remember number 8 either. When I said "Emi's done better" I think I was thinking of your piece. Are you sure this piece was actually performed? I'm not sure if it was. . .
It was the one where Phil was at a gay bar and you were in it.
Oh. Oh yeah. . .
Hey yeah! I hadn't been able to picture Emmy onstage performing so I totally drew a blank. Yeah, I thought it was pretty good. I would have substituted Eric for Osean though, would that be great or what
1. The Merchant of Testes by Paul GoldieI always feel like I'm learning stuff from paul McGold. That and if I remember, somebody always dies in his pieces. I think there was a little something off with it that doesn't make it complete Goldstein...2. Killer Beans Written by Lily "LC" Chong and inspired by Lainey HarrisonDefinitely great improvement.3. A History of Football by King SophieGrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreatness...4. Spam by the Brothers Achrazoglou(Food rap)The things you think of and start to write while at your Grandma's... I don't really have an opinion, but I also don't really listen to the lyrics, because beat-boxing is harder than anything else in the world 5. Fort Knox is in Some Serious Trouble by O'SandraCheck Plus Plus Plus6. Summer of '07 by Lily ChongKind of hard to review...7. Worst Birthday Ever by King SophieGood. 8. Of Encyclopedias and Pole Dancers by Emilia Batesgood, but not her best9. Untitled Document by LILLYhaha, really good* Good start folks. We definitely need some more youth in da house though. I think everyone was a senior though??? Maybe not goldy. We need faith, and margo, and some major Freshmanage...